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[Osiris II]

AWSOME game

It reminds me of tomb raider. The traps are probably the most fun. There should be more puzzles other than switches, and the combat is so-so. I like the editor mode! Good decision. Here's me code, I've tested it and it's possible! :D

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ChromeShark responds:

Thanks for your review. Tomb Raider was a big inspiration, more so for chapter 1 though, I tried to make it a bit less Tomb Raidery this time as some people called it a rip off before. I'll be adding much more variety to the puzzles in chapter 3.

I enjoyed playing your level, I don't think it was completable though, couldn't find a way up. Thanks for posting it though.

[Ragdoll Avalanche II]

Hahahaha it's fun..but...

well, it has a lot more room for potential. The game itself is kinda of simple, and, with creativity, you could make it better for #3.

some things I could suggest are...

- choosing the skin for the blades that fall with a corresponding backround. (real icicles with a snowy backround, lava rocks in a volcano backround, or even sharp sticks in a forest backround)

- Different modes (there could be one where spikes fly at you from all sides of the screen, not just falling to the ground. No diagonal though. Just do the up and down thing but from all 4 sides of the screen, but make few come at you at once or else it would be too hard)

- music selection (that song got kinda old)

[Purdy Fireworks]

Hell..

One guy complained about his 800 Mhz not keeping up....my 1.5 Ghz even slowed down...sheesh! It was good, but it should have had music, and just more depth into the entire project. Seeing a whole bunch of fireworks isn't exactly interesting and people wouldn't want to do it again. As a game, it fails, but as an animation, it rocks.

[Jelly Fishin']

This is great!

Extremely innovative and awsome! There are a couple things that needed to be done though. There should have been a better backround, or a powerup that would make you invisible. Also, the music got repetitive and such. Lastly, there should be different modes like a captur the glaf or something. The one mode got kind of boring. If you do those tweaks, this game will be awsome! Might I suggest adding walls or something? ^_^

[Avoid the Shadows]

Very good idea

I think this could go somewhere and eventually be a good game. I suggest you make the playing field a bit larger, and you said that this scanario was a "dream", I suggest you add colors and effects to make it seem surreal and more like a dream. Add a storyline, tighten up the graphics, and you got a pretty good game! However, There should be more than one level and maybe bosses too. =)

[Dragon Fear]

Nice concept....but it could have been better.

Really nice concept of using the mic. However, all I had to do was blow air really fast and I beat most levels. Kind of easy, but I liked the interactivity. Too bad that's all there was to the game, though. Maybe next time you can add button commands to blow fire or throw rocks or something? That would be cool.

[Geography Game: Europe]

I hate this game, it made me feel stupid

My final score was -1255!!! :'( :'( YOU MONSTER, you made me dumb!!!!

CaptainDiv responds:

yes indeed - I made u dumb, that'll be it! so sorry - my advice is, avoid any educational material, then ull probably rediscover ur brain cells right?


right...?

[Muffins theMagicalMuskrat]

=D

Rofl. ROCK ON MUFFINS!!!! This game was great. Lmao make more.

[Keep on Rollin]

Oh man.

This game is a lot of fun. Graphics could be better. And....how do I beat the part with the tiny spring?

[Fed to the Sick (Sprites)]

I liked it...but...

It could have been better in a few ways. The bad guys should have been different, and you should have been able to do more than just swing your sword and run. Like jumping and stuff. If you did put that in, I didn't see any instructions saying so. Also, sound got annoying.