Score: 6

"Good idea"

submission: BluMan Adventures 1

date: August 19, 2008

obviously inspired by that helicopter game, although this was almost nearly impossible. Here's a tip though: make the guy you're controlling move faster than the objects he's trying to dodge. If you make him move too slow it's impossible to get past the first object :)

Score: 7

"Pretty good"

submission: Sonic - Rise of Robotnik

date: August 17, 2008

But it's not really much of a game, when people started joining my party I thought it was going to be like a turn based RPG but it turned out to be a sexual surprise :D

Score: 5

"I liked it"

submission: Manic Mouse Avoider

date: August 17, 2008

It was different from a LOT of other mouse avoiders so it felt fresh and new. However, I think the portal to level 6 is broken

Score: 10

"I <3 this song"

submission: ParagonX9 - Chaoz Fantasy

date: August 3, 2007

I think this song is just simply amazing, it varies from part to part but it still has the same theme which I think is great. It's just so addictive

The ONLY problem I see in this song is also the problem you have with a lot of your songs. The track is very solid from right to the beginning up until about 5 seconds before the end. The ending to a lot of your songs are so sudden and it feels a little rushed out. You can't just build your song like a set of stairs and the last step come crashing down to the bottom, I think it should go higher and higher. But that's just my opinion.

Score: 8

"Hmm....mixed feelings"

submission: Assault On All Territories

date: September 6, 2006

Lol, okay well I think this is a very fun song and it sounds pretty. but it could use some variety throughout. I noticed you added some stuff but essentially it was the same beat throughtout. I liked how it went back and forth (Tremolo I think it is?) and that sounded really cool. However the main melody got too repetitive and it bordered on annoying, but I guess it would be good for like a game with battle sequences, you know?

Your creativity is what's key in these songs...now just apply it with technique and practice! :)

Score: 7

"Well...hm"

submission: Mysteries Under The Clouds

date: September 6, 2006

There were some parts I really liked and some parts I didn't care for.

I think you should have used the other Jegon melody as more people would understand where it came from (FF:CC). This melody sounds really off, not to mention the awkward gaps in between them when it plays over again. You should have filled that gap with maybe a bubble or a different sound effect. And as for that bubble, I felt it was really loud and violating. It could have started loud, but then maybe fade away into the melody again. That would give it an extra interesting bit, no? Near the ending were these weird bells. The bells themselves sounded really nice but the notes they were playing sounded all over the place and didn't fit in at all. It almost sounded out of key. And then you added more and more until the melody was almost drowned out.

As for the stuff I liked, I feel this is an extremely creative song. I really like the whines in the beginning going into the rain. Speaking of the rain, I feel that added a lot to this piece. If you were to take it out it would almost seem empty. I think it also added an eery almost sad mood. Which I liked. However, to continue with that sad mood you should, as I previously stated, you should have used the other melody. This one sounded too uplifiting. Maybe that's what you wanted? I'm not sure. It would have just added to the overall experience.

Some flaws, but the creativity really makes up for it
3/5